My Comment on Lyle's blog post about camp

I think my Comment was kind of like a quality comment because I put what Lyle done that was good like encouraging Sene and I said what I really liked about his post and I like how he was riding the big crashing waves.  I think my comment on Lyle's blog a quality comment because I put a question at the end, I put my blog there if he wanted to comment on it and I put who it was from.

My remember when... poem

That Was Camp. 

Remember when we're doing archery and Mrs Archer, Ashlyn and Tui got the bulls eye everybody was amazed?

Remember when we were doing giants ladder and I thought I was going to die or fall off?

That was camp.

Remember when we were surfing and James caught lots of big waves and he was riding it like a real surfer ?

Remember when we were doing slingshot and the red team won but James got the ball in the black box?

That was camp.

Remember when we had really nice soft shell tacos for dinner that smelt really delicious?

Do you remember when it was nighttime and the boys were being so loud that the adults will come in and tell them to be quiet?

That was camp.

My Blog Comment on Kereru creators Pukekawa School's Blog WK 2 31/07/2015

Today I was looking all around for a post on Pukekawa school (because we are quad blogging in my class) Then I saw this post that really hooked me in. It was the Whittakers Chocolate Milk and it hooked me in because I like chocolate.

Here is my comment on their blog:

My 4 sentence Recount

End of term reflection

Hi everyone this is the end of term reflection. We do end of term reflection so we can reflect back at our learning.

Backward-Looking:

What have been your learning highlights this term?

My Learning Highlights I think my learning highlight was good like in geometry and writing. I think my learning highlight was bad in reading because I scored a 2p in the e-asttle.

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Inward-Looking:

What were your Learner Profile goals for Term 2? Have your goals changed? Are you on track to meet your goals?

My learner profile goal was to be tolerant to others and fill their buckets. I think my goal changed once but I don’t remember. I think I am on track to my goals.

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Outward-Looking:

If you were the teacher, what comments would you make about your learning so far?

I think my comment about my learning will be that I need to work on more reading.

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Forward-Looking:

As you look back at your learning so far, what's one thing that you would like to try to improve upon?

I would try to improve in reading so I can be a better reader and make stories. I need to improve on reading so I can level up my initiative.

My Blog Comment on Room 8 Paerata's School Blog WK 10 26/06/15

Today I was looking all around for a post on Room 8 Paerata school (because we are quad blogging in my class) Then I saw this post that really hooked me in. I saw that it was an Xtra math certificate.













Here is my comment.

5/06/15 SH Speedwrite Proofread: Shiny stuff in the sky that is shaped as balls.

[Introduction]

Did you know that a star is not shaped out as a star the shape is a ball and there is lots of them? Stars are balls of hot gas that shine in the sky. Did you know that the sun is a dwarf star and the sun is not actually orange it is actually green but the sun gets all firey and that is why you think it is orange. If you want to know more about stars you should read more of this information report.

Appearance

Now I am going to tell you about the stars appearance. All stars are different colours and that means it’s a different type. Some stars are blue, some stars are red, some stars are white and some stars are ultraviolet. If the star is a different colour that means it is a different temperature. For the red star that is a lowest temperature. For the ultraviolet star it is the highest.

Types of stars

Now I am going to tell you about the types of stars. They are different types of stars and they are different sizes. First  is the dwarf star and that is the smallest star. Next is the main sequence star and it’s bigger than the dwarf star. Now it’s the giant star and the giant star is bigger than the dwarf star and the the main sequence star. Now it’s the super giant star and the super giant star is  biggest star.

Life cycle

Now I am going to tell you about the lifecycle of a star. First the star is formed as hydrogen atoms. Then gravity pushes it and it comes together and turn into helium atoms. Then the new star gets born in the centre of nebulae. Then the star grows and it grows in the order of the types of stars but the main sequence goes first and the dwarf star comes last because that’s when like the star dies.

[Conclusion]

Did you know that stars are usually 10 billion years old .Now this is the end of the star information report. I hope you make one yourself. If you want anymore information you can check this website http://www.ducksters.com/science/star.php.